All right, that page didn't take too long. Nice job on the art work, man. Keep it up

Awesome work!

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I'm just a writer: thank God I'm not a banker right now.

Wow. Not bad. Just as I expected. Fire is the symbiote's weakness, after all. Just hope Sasuke and Neji get out of this alive. Hinata, too.

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What's up, people?! Ready for the world to be reborn in fire and brimstone?!

excellent!

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Ever think that there might be a reason God kept the stars so far apart? I mean, what if every other intelligent race out there is as stupid as we are?

sweet you put in the secondary weakness. great job.

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Set Up! Set Up! Set Up!
The silver mask, the black muffler
The amount shines, V and V
Stop! GOD, the evil harbor
The scream of the father is dying
The Ridol cord of anger it comes, pulling out
X Rider also goes today
Masked Rider X! X! X!

How's the progress on page 23?

Very. Slowly. I just haven't had any time to work on it.

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"To not understand is to never carry the burden of responsibility. Understanding is pain, but anything less is unacceptable." JMS, Thor#7

why dosen't sasuke use his cursed seal?

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98 percent of people put random shit in there signatures because they saw it in another sig telling them to. if your one of the 2 percent that dosen't continue on not doing it.

This story is not entirely rooted in the actual Naruto continuity. A lot of things happen that are contrary to the actual storyline simply because that's the way I'm choosing to tell it (partially due to a lack of knowledge that I had when I first started this, and partially because I just felt like telling them that way). In the case of Sasuke and his cursemark, I went with the assumption that he would eventually return to Konoha (this was before I knew of certain things that have happened in recent storylines), and that after his ordeals with Orochimaru and being brought to his senses, he would not rely on the power of the cursemark as much as he did before.

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"To not understand is to never carry the burden of responsibility. Understanding is pain, but anything less is unacceptable." JMS, Thor#7